homework 25

 victors comment: heyy i liked your story. i found it really funny. i think that this was good cus it is as if it could happen in real life in class. i think that this story takes a aspect of how us kids act and that we are very silly. and by being silly is one of the ways of being cool.

sams comments: i liked your story sam. this story shows what all teenagers go through as they get older. everybody has their own idea of cool and by reading this story i get the idea you think people feel like they are cool because of what they have on. and then the downside to it is that you shouldnt always wear what others are wearing and that people will make fun of you reguardless what you are wearing.

yurelis comment: i enjoyed your story. from your story i got out that people use each other for what they have and who they are. and thats whats wrong with us today. we feel that people just want to use us for a period of time and then when we dont have what they want they go and leave..we leach onto others to feel cool cus we have everythin they have for the time being.

yazmin p. comment: i like how you put your story into a outside person kinda. you descried this chick as a "cool" character and how she acts. you put a typical outline of a cool person in the beginning but you also twisted it up with how she was also a good person the her community and how she had a positive influence on things. and by reading your story thats your point of view of being cool.

yassy jones comment: heyyy yassy i liked your story. i think that it had a good message to it. that kids dont take school seriously and that we just come to school because we "have" to but we dont. and it shows that even thought the teacher was mean she cares about him and wants him to do good in his future and life and wants him to become something. i just hope that doesnt happen in real life.