Monday, November 30, 2009

homework 25

 victors comment: heyy i liked your story. i found it really funny. i think that this was good cus it is as if it could happen in real life in class. i think that this story takes a aspect of how us kids act and that we are very silly. and by being silly is one of the ways of being cool.

sams comments: i liked your story sam. this story shows what all teenagers go through as they get older. everybody has their own idea of cool and by reading this story i get the idea you think people feel like they are cool because of what they have on. and then the downside to it is that you shouldnt always wear what others are wearing and that people will make fun of you reguardless what you are wearing.

yurelis comment: i enjoyed your story. from your story i got out that people use each other for what they have and who they are. and thats whats wrong with us today. we feel that people just want to use us for a period of time and then when we dont have what they want they go and leave..we leach onto others to feel cool cus we have everythin they have for the time being.

yazmin p. comment: i like how you put your story into a outside person kinda. you descried this chick as a "cool" character and how she acts. you put a typical outline of a cool person in the beginning but you also twisted it up with how she was also a good person the her community and how she had a positive influence on things. and by reading your story thats your point of view of being cool.

yassy jones comment: heyyy yassy i liked your story. i think that it had a good message to it. that kids dont take school seriously and that we just come to school because we "have" to but we dont. and it shows that even thought the teacher was mean she cares about him and wants him to do good in his future and life and wants him to become something. i just hope that doesnt happen in real life.

Tuesday, November 17, 2009

homework 24

once apon a time there was an 11th grader name shaquiqua johnson. she thought she was the coolest person in her grade. it was about two weeks into school and she tried to become more popular. so she started to socialize more and became more outgoing. next thing she knows she going out with someone in one of her classes. everything was going good for her. the relationship was going great and she had made a lot of friends and became cool with people. but the whole becoming cool amd fitting in started to interfear with her education. her grades started slipping in some of her classes. before she knew it, she was failing some of her classes and she started to get overwhelmed. she started to get stressed out and getting mad at people and always being grumpy. her mood went down as she would slowly walk through the hallways with her head down and a lil frown on her face. she wasnt always jolly and playful. instead of coming to school with a dont really care that much additude and only going just to hang out with her friends, she decided to change her act. she would now go to all of her classes and paid more attenton. she would raise her hand and do all the class work and participated a lot. she would do the homework and started talkin to the guidence counsler to talk about college. her mom noticed that she has changed and became very proud. now shaquiqua knows that being cool isnt just having a lot of friends but also doing good in school and having a good life.

Monday, November 16, 2009

homework 23

in class on friday we started a new unit. its called cool. how to be cool...what is cool..what makes us cool..things that people think is cool. so far i think that there is no right pr wrong way of being cool. everybody has their own perspective and point of views of being cool. some people think that listening to rap and hip-hop and wearin baggy clothes and big tee's with due rags is cool. and others think that wear skinny jeans with a graphic tee and a fitted listenin to pop and r&b is cool. there are a bunch of different cliques that feel that the people in the group is cool because they are all similar.
another thing that makes people feel like they are cool is because they are popular or well known. being popular by having everybody know who you are and everybody knows your name. but that all doesnt matter because they could just know your name just cus buy not because your cool to them or important in their life. being popular isnt everything especially if you dont have the right connections and the people you know wont get you nowhere in life.
sometimes trying to be cool is a bad thing. the people that are "lames" or "uncool" people try to "fit in" with the in groups and try to become someone they are not. they would change their personality and change their clothes and the music they listen to and maybe even dump the old friends they would normally chill with just cus they are considered "misfits".
doing cool things gets you in trouble. people find drinking and smoking very cool. you cant have fun unless your drinking or smoking or at a party going crazy.
i would like to know who invented the "cool" trend..when did it start..what was the first intentions of being cool?

art project

for my art project i did a quick powerpoint but for some reason it wont upload onto my blog

Wednesday, November 11, 2009

final draft

In class, we have talked about digital technology. Digital technology has a really huge impact on the young generation mentally. We rely on the use of electronics for our everyday lives and we feel that we need them for every little thing that we do. If its not doing something on the computer or watching television. We always bring our cells phones with us everywhere we go. We take the cell phone with us when we go to the store, to the next room, or even down the block. Especially when we kids are in class we text all the time to another peer and sometimes they might be next to the person that they are texting. We always get in trouble for texting and face the consequences that come with it. Digital technology has influenced the young population significantly by brainwashing our minds because we can’t do things for ourselves and we rely on the next best thing.
In class we have had several group discussions about what our opinions are and what we think about the whole digital technology topic. Some people say that its not our faults that we are so addicted to using technology and that once we get hooked onto something that we can’t stop using it because there is no turning back. Us compared to the old days and how people have lived things are mostly done for us and that is why our parents and the older people are saying we are lazy and don't do anything for ourselves. We have everything given to us and don’t have to lift a finger. I think that they are right but they can’t get mad at us because we didn't do anything. It was their generation that came up with the whole idea and invented most of the technology that we use right now, here in the 21st century. I feel that at times they tend to get jealous because of the fact that they didn't have what we have now and they had to do everything and had to work extra hard to get what they wanted. Nothing came to them as the way they do now with us. Even then they still didn't get what they wanted right then and there. They would have to wait to get it. That is why they think we are brats now and don't appreciate anything that is given to us. Which is true because all of the inventions and next best thing that is coming out each generation gets worse and worse. Which is exactly why digital technology has been brainwashing us slowly.
I think that through the years the generations are only going to get worse and then were going to be in the same situation our parents are in right now because of the fact that we wouldn't have what our kids are growing up with. Then we too, are going to feel that they are brats and don't do anything for themselves as well. And the cycle is going to continue and only go down hill. Everybody is going to turn into digital zombies and the whole world is going to definitely be based off of digital devices. This is why digital technology is destroying our lives and we get lazier.
We have done several experiments to see how people are obsessed with using digital technology. One of them was going out and interacting with other people outside of the class to see what their out take is on the whole situation. We went out on a mission to the park and interviewed somebody about what his life is like with being digitalized. The guy told us that he doesn't use technology a lot and the only thing he really uses is his cell phone and his computer. We asked how long does he use the computer for and he responded only for a couple of hours during the day because of his job. Then we asked about his children and he said they use their cell phones and are always on the computer all the time. He also said they tend to fight over it and get into arguments about who has been on it longer. We then asked how much money has he spent on all of the electronics he bought for him plus his family. He responded with a number in the high thousands. So not only digitalizing our lives wasting our souls and brains away but also emptying our wallets. This trend seems not to have a positive side to it.
I went out and interviewed a couple of my friends and family members to see how electronics have a positive or negative effect on their lives. The first person I interviewed was my friend Ryan. He was saying how yes using electronics now is going benefit him in the future because he would like to do something in the photography field. So using technology now like the computer and cameras will help him get an early start on his career and he would feel more informed and have more knowledge on what he should be doing. Another person I have interviewed was my other best friend Monique. She loves technology and cannot live with out her computer and television. She said that technology was the best part that happened to her teenage life as she got older.
I asked my mother questions as well to see what she had say. She said how what is wrong with the population today is that we don’t do anything productive with our lives and we need to stop with all the use of electronics. We need to stop always being on the computer and being all the cell phones because it is not going to help us with the future. In class to further our thinking we read a book called feed. It was about a group of teenagers that were programmed by the “feed”. The feed was telling them what to do and what was cool and not cool. They would listen the feed and follow it as if they had no minds of their own. The book was very helpful in a way because we saw a authors point of view and read a book about the trend and what effect it has on a group of kids.

revised essay

In class, we have talked about digital technology. Digital technology has a really huge impact on the young generation mentally. We rely on the use of electronics for our everyday lives and we feel that we need them for every little thing that we do. If its not doing something on the computer or watching television. We always bring our cells phones with us everywhere we go. We take the cell phone with us when we go to the store, to the next room, or even down the block. Especially when we kids are in class we text all the time to another peer and sometimes they might be next to the person that they are texting. We always get in trouble for texting and face the consequences that come with it. Digital technology has influenced the young population significantly by brainwashing our minds because we can’t do things for ourselves and we rely on the next best thing.
In class we have had several group discussions about what our opinions are and what we think about the whole digital technology topic. Some people say that its not our faults that we are so addicted to using technology and that once we get hooked onto something that we can’t stop using it because there is no turning back. Us compared to the old days and how people have lived things are mostly done for us and that is why our parents and the older people are saying we are lazy and don't do anything for ourselves. We have everything given to us and don’t have to lift a finger. I think that they are right but they can’t get mad at us because we didn't do anything. It was their generation that came up with the whole idea and invented most of the technology that we use right now, here in the 21st century. I feel that at times they tend to get jealous because of the fact that they didn't have what we have now and they had to do everything and had to work extra hard to get what they wanted. Nothing came to them as the way they do now with us. Even then they still didn't get what they wanted right then and there. They would have to wait to get it. That is why they think we are brats now and don't appreciate anything that is given to us. Which is true because all of the inventions and next best thing that is coming out each generation gets worse and worse. Which is exactly why digital technology has been brainwashing us slowly.
I think that through the years the generations are only going to get worse and then were going to be in the same situation our parents are in right now because of the fact that we wouldn't have what our kids are growing up with. Then we too, are going to feel that they are brats and don't do anything for themselves as well. And the cycle is going to continue and only go down hill. Everybody is going to turn into digital zombies and the whole world is going to definitely be based off of digital devices. This is why digital technology is destroying our lives and we get lazier.
We have done several experiments to see how people are obsessed with using digital technology. One of them was going out and interacting with other people outside of the class to see what their out take is on the whole situation. We went out on a mission to the park and interviewed somebody about what his life is like with being digitalized. The guy told us that he doesn't use technology a lot and the only thing he really uses is his cell phone and his computer. We asked how long does he use the computer for and he responded only for a couple of hours during the day because of his job. Then we asked about his children and he said they use their cell phones and are always on the computer all the time. He also said they tend to fight over it and get into arguments about who has been on it longer. We then asked how much money has he spent on all of the electronics he bought for him plus his family. He responded with a number in the high thousands. So not only digitalizing our lives wasting our souls and brains away but also emptying our wallets. This trend seems not to have a positive side to it.
I went out and interviewed a couple of my friends and family members to see how electronics have a positive or negative effect on their lives. The first person I interviewed was my friend Ryan. He was saying how yes using electronics now is going benefit him in the future because he would like to do something in the photography field. So using technology now like the computer and cameras will help him get an early start on his career and he would feel more informed and have more knowledge on what he should be doing. Another person I have interviewed was my other best friend Monique. She loves technology and cannot live with out her computer and television. She said that technology was the best part that happened to her teenage life as she got older.
I asked my mother questions as well to see what she had say. She said how what is wrong with the population today is that we don’t do anything productive with our lives and we need to stop with all the use of electronics. We need to stop always being on the computer and being all the cell phones because it is not going to help us with the future.

Friday, November 6, 2009

draft

in class we have had several group discussions about what our opinions are an what we think about the whole topic. some people say that its not our faults that we are so addicted to using technology and that once we get hooked onto something that we cant stop using it because there is no turning back. us compared to the old days and how people have lived things are mostly done for us and thats why the older people are saying we are lazy and don't do anything for ourselves. i think that they are right but they cant get mad at us because we didn't do anything. i feel that at times they tend to get jelouse because of the fact that they didn't have what we have and they had to do everything and had to work extra hard to get what they wanted. even then they still didn't get what they wanted right then and there. they would have to wait to get it. thats why they think we are brats now and don't appreciate anything that is given to us.
i think that thru the years the generations are only going to get worse and then were gonna be in the same situation our parents are in right now because of the fact that we wouldn't have what our kids are growing up with and that we are too feel that they are brats and don't do anything for themselves as well.

Thursday, November 5, 2009

draft

we have done several experiments to see how people are obsessed with using digital technology. one of them are going out and interacting with other people outside of the class to see what their out take is on the whole situation. we went out in a mission to the park and interviewed somebody what their life is like. one guy told us that he doesn't use technology a lot and the only thing he really uses is his cell phone and his computer. we asked how long does he use the computer for and he responded with a couple hours of the day because of his job.
i went out and asked a couple of my friends how they are with electronics. my friend ryan was saying how yes using electronics now will benefit him in the future because he would like to do something in the photography field. so using technology now like the computer and cameras will help him get and early start on his career and he would feel more informed and have more knowledge on what he should be doing. another person i have interviewed was my other best friend monique. she loves technology and can not live with out her computer and television. she said that technology was the best part that happened to her as she got older.
another source i used was my mother. she said how whats wrong with the population today is that we dont do anything productive with our lives and we need to stop with all the use of electronics. we need to stop always being on the computer and being all the cell phones because its not gonna help us with the future.

first draft

digital technology has influenced the young population significantly by brainwashing our minds because we cant do things for ourselves and we rely on the next best thing. in class we have talked about digital technology. digital technology has a really huge impact on the young generation mentally. we rely on the use of electronics for our everyday lives and we feel that we need them for every little thing that we do. if its not doing something on the computer or watching television. we always bring our cells phones with us everywhere we go. to the store to the next room or only down the block. especially when we kids are in class we text all the time to another peer and sometimes they might be next to the person that they are texting. and we always get in trouble for texting and face the concequences that come with it.

Monday, November 2, 2009

thesis statement

digital technology has influenced the young population significantly by brainwashing our minds because we cant do things for ourselves and we rely on the next best thing.